the actual story seems like it may be good, but it seems like they had a terrible or lazy translator who made it seem terrible(switching genders, numbers being mixed up, that sort of thing)
I liked the story pretty much. The mc development is actually quite good.I lowkey like how the story is advancing.Although there is always room for improvement ??
This is a really good start for this type of book I’m looking forward too future chapter most likely to be my favourite book of the year let’s hope for a lot of support from the masses lol
Already wrote about what I love so now i'm going to add what I think can be improved and hopefully the author can take my suggestions into account. 1. Yun says he doesn't want to rely on Ling Xi too much however it's really all he has done so far whether it comes to dealing with every enemy that comes up or something else. 2. I would like to see Yun truly start getting combat experience by fighting other cultivators, however this isn't a huge knock because I really enjoy how the story is realistic as he has just became a cultivator so he clearly should be way behind when it comes to fighting people who grew up in a cultivation family or sect. 3. I would love for the world building to be a bit better and be explained in depth at some point. I can understand wanting to have a layer of mystery which makes the reader more interested and attached to the world building however it is a bit confusing that we know of the cultivation realm where strong cultivators are however there has been mentions of another realm above that where the Mo family fled to however we know nothing about even the cultivator realm yet so it feels a bit odd having something like that thrown in already. Keep up the good work author, just some personal suggestions. PS: I would love if you made a page that has all of the cultivation realms/tiers as it can get confusing which realm is above which
not a bad novel, my favorites of this genre is called the journey of the fate destroying emperor. it checks all the boxes: op smart mc with ruthlessness to boots.
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