Beginning is exciting and I'd like to see how the story will develop. I especially like the heroine, she is smart and strong. So long there was ni brain dead characters.
The man character is a bit weirdThe synopsis almost made me belive this was a romance novel until I read the whole thingDescriptions need more workOverall its not a bad chapter it just needs more polishing
the Arthur has a great idea Even though it is just the beginning, I am eager to read the next few chapters. Simply give it a shot and see
an awesome villain novel with a system. I love reading these kinds of novels.
the novel is very good to me but i gotta comment about the really slow updateif you like really overpowered main character this is your right choice(** : i gonna love this if his gonna turn out to be harem novel )
For those of you who wonder why you have this novel in your bookstores. It's simple, I deleted the content of the other novel that had no future and I'm going to use it for this new novel. You are free to stop following this novel, I don't care at all (well, a little yes, XD), but I hope you can at least give it a chance. Thanks for your time.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka
This novel is terrifying, but it also manages to be a fun, interesting read. The characters feel very developed, very human-- and are easy to associate with. I love the interactions between the male and female protagonists. Action is well-written, easy to follow, and utilizes the environment to further reinforce the tone. The main conflict is something I haven't read about before in a web novel, so is refreshing and new. Oh, and the Author's mastery of English is virtually perfect. I've been reading this for weeks now, but I figured to give you a review for that sweet, sweet XP. You get one of the very, very few 5.0's I've given. Great work, Author! Let's work hard towards the future.
I loved the plot very much, it was a new experience. The writing is awesome. I learnt many things from your work. I'll look forward to your next update.
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This story is really good. I've read all available chapters in one night. I couldn't put the story down. The characters and the background setting are getting better with each chapter.Now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next upload. Keep up the good work.
A very nice read. I enjoyed how the author is able to engage his readers. I would totally recommend it to everyone. A very nice job, author.