Author here! This is my first book and I’m glad to finally start it. I will say now that I work two jobs and this is just a side hobby for me so don’t expect frequent updates. This book will be dark and not a very light hearted tale so please keep in mind that the main character isn’t a very good person, I mean you can’t be if you kill people for food right? Anyways I look forward to all the reviews or comments both positive and negative.Even if I don’t update often I will strive for one chapter a week or two this may improve as I improve but like I said this is just a hobby for me.
Ok Translation. Story itself is as cliche as it gets. Worldbuilding is good, reminds me a bit of og Dragon Age
I like that it's not all about war and their prowess their are also part that you can't stop but laugh when Raon and Wrath is bantering each other
This is so goood!!! Keep it up bro the story and characters are amazing! I hope to see more from u ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Ummmmmmmm, i don't know it's great. I love it. Used great words........ And I really don't know what to say I'm just writing nonsense just to reach the minimum number of characters hehe...But, it's great!???
I find it very odd that a kid that was living alone for years in the slums has not a single ounce of "Street Smarts". Plot armor and System reliance is way too heavy + I'm not a fan of naive Mcs that can't think by themselvesThe world building looks pretty good and it's made in a very unique setting but just the MC ruins it for me. Maybe he gets some character development but I haven't seen other reviews mentioning it...I expect a thief to be smart and cunning but the MC is directly the opposite with heavy plot armor which doesn't make sense given the setting he was raised into
I don't think there is much to say besides thank you. This story is very entertaining and I look forward to following it till the end.
The room was stuffy and hot with a window slightly cracked, but it wasn't helping. I could feel the sweat dripping from the center of my armpits down the sides of my upper body. My abs were moist and slightly sticky. I blinked twice shifting over the top of my bed sheet; my eyes squinting at what had happened. I felt everything, yet nothing at the same time. I brought my hands to my lips questioning what had happened. The blue walls around my room began spinning around me or maybe it was all in my head.
"Are you sure? Just think hard and focus, so you can remember what he did earlier."
'Felix Stay here and be ready to drive away Joy u whit me'
This woman was interesting, he never met someone who was bold enough to speak to him this way. Doesn't she know who he was?
Rendering a good return on invested capital.