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So far the book is amazing I’d recommend it to anyone wanting something unique Cause the FL is a whole vibe Me being used to them Fl being helpless and distressed This was an eye opener The pacing and character development is good The storyline would have you glued Currently I’m writing exams and will be back to read em allSo I’d highly recommend this to y’all readers looking for something unique and interesting The book is great
Who will be the MC? He king or one of his sons?
This is awesome , I like the part where he pierced the eyes of the zombies with his thumbs alone????
I really don't have much to say about this book but those that are reading it understand just how good it is. Unlike my first book that had literally zero planning, I did my best to plan this one out and carve out a great fantasy world.I understand that the pacing is slow but the crazy parts of the book are coming up soon. Please ask me any question you have and I will do my best to answer.
This is the best writer in the worst place.
I didnt rate the character design because there are no images, but i already imagined how Su, the old man, the corrupted Lord and those wicked soldiers look like.Same goes for the Oriazerks and the Wyverns.
So far from what I've read, the writing style is incredibly easy to read. The details to the main character's thoughts and internal dialogues are so well organized and well-thought that he actually feels like a real person living in some kind of world. The world building and the character are designs are top notch.Here's my message to you dear author as a fellow author: you're doing incredibly great! this novel is written with love, i can just tell. don't give up and keep writing more and more :)) and for that, u get my 5 stars!
Dragonborne with Origin System is an exhilarating blend of high fantasy and intricate world-building. The story centers on a protagonist who discovers a powerful, mysterious Origin System that opens the door to untold abilities. The character development is strong, as we follow the hero's journey of self-discovery, skill mastery, and adaptation to new powers. The world itself is rich and immersive, filled with dragons, mythical creatures, and complex magic systems
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Good book! Good book! Good book! I was told to take a peak of this from a bestie who reads similar stuff from this author and I am glad I did! Wonderful stuff here! Mc is a chad!
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