What Are You Two Doing?

This is a new novel and author. This means normal issues seen with new authors pop up every here and there but the story has great potential and is of reasonable quality already. I personally am very much looking forward to see how this novel progresses. Go for it author.

MC just trying to live in peace, but everyone just won't let him. Poor mc.......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,....., .......,..........,.....,

I really enjoyed the story so far, I am a sucker for slice of life and this has been a great read very entertaining. The writing quality is good no problem with it and while I can see some people whining about Kit I find it refreshing, it feels more realistic of someone that has his background and how he is naïve in regards to various things while chasing his dream and he learns along the way.

A very unimaginative and boring attempt at an evil mc.The mcs gold finger has nothing to do with filth. Its just a murderhobo system that rewards him with points for killing and can upgrade his cultivation and techniques with a click of a button. The use of evil points is also uninspired. While the mc is truly evil and I give author pros for that, its very one dimensional. He has no emotions, its like watching a robot cut chickens. How can readers connect with a character like this?The mc is overpowered and faces no problems making the conflicts boring cause you know how they are all going to end. The characters around the mc are similarly cardboard-like and offer nothing to the story than points for the mc to use. There is no excitement to be had reading this novel.

Standard bland, contrived, lazy, unoriginal, generic and soulless webnovel, nothing we've never seen before. Every character is so unbearably badly written that I can't help but want to slap the authors hand for writing this nonsense.If you told me that the author has never had an original thought since the day he was born I'd believe you. I guess if your standards are appallingly low you might not mind this novel but I still have a fair bit of self respect left. Utterly banal ideas, exasperating execution. 0.5/5.

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