Synopsis need an insight and elaboration that what exactly the book is about, it gives a very vague idea which sounds bland.The author switched to personal narration soon but it wasn't tough to read it for me but for average WN readers....they prefer 3rd person narration. I've seen authors complaining that their readers drop books whenever 1st person narration arrives. But I assure you this book has a seamless flow in 1st person, so don't hold back. As for the grammatical pov it is finest quality work and you won't see blunders, the book just lack in one aspect and that's plotline spice.The MC gets betrayed by his trustworthy pals and is given a second chance as he travels back into time to make things flow in his style. MC is not your usual dumb and weak person and since he drops his level from 577 to point 1 he can be regarded as weak. But....BUT....he is sharp, witty and kinda omnipresent since he had seen future/end point already.
