My guess is all the bad reviews are deleted, cause this is not great. It’ not a bad premise, but very definitely not small upgrades. The writing quality is grade school level, or non native English speaker level
This story is good and I like the idea of ML waking up in a book that he trash talked. I believe there's room for improvement in the writing quality. It's not bad by any means, but it's not the best it could be.Also the story is a bit forgettable and I struggled to remained interested. It's a good idea, but it doesn't quite stick the landing for me.I can tell it'll get better as it goes on, but for now I'll just say this story is good enough.
translating quality is okay for the first 230 chapters but after that translation becomes inconsistent. either a change of translator or a laziness to change and conform to the former terms. quality can be said to be dropped since more sentence mistakes were made also after. world background is interesting. if quality further drops will be dropping this.
It's definitely one of the best on this website with entertainment genre.There are a few errors like "......" when talking.Author should try to stay away from cliche moments so far, there are few but if the author adds more in the future, it might ruin the story.Please don't drop it.
bro please improve on grammar and dont lie in the synopsis and also stop writing cringe...........................................................................................
Why? Why Bai Qiuran's novel is translated again?...............................................................................................................
The only drawback is that there are no more chapters so far everything is smooth. When I read my heart it feels fresh I wish my life was that easy xD
I'm sad ???? Webnovel reject this good novel, I even recommend it to other people then Webnovel just reject this masterpiece. Why!! Why!!! We novel always choose all medical novels so why reject this, why reject this masterpiece
Meh i guess i dislike the system, like the whole flirting thing made no sense. How is getting punished flirting...The characters are super basic, the mc seems to have no personality, as the system will craft him into a possible simp. And all hes been doinf is obsessing over this one girl ...i dialike the female leads character.I dislike her as a person, for beinf a basic bit.ch. And the fact that ahe cant deal with such a little loss... But whats worse is that the character herself just feels like it gonna be used to push the mc in a certain. Direction and eventually make him fall in love or some cliche bs.The teacher ia pretty bad clearly she doeant know how to teach. My opinion of course. But i can already see the author gonna trick us into thinking she is a good person by saying oml she ia still teaching even though ahe had surgery. A broken boomer ia still a boomer. She can be a great person but she ia still a horrible teacher.I can see thia book consisting in just many many conaidiences with forced comedy that realistically would never happen, and ita slightly ironic. The author can give us questions that need "logic" but he isnt clever enough to give actual unique characters and unique interactions and settings, its instead incredibly cliche and basic.Oh yeah why was watching videos not relaxing... Idnt understand, if ur an introvert all that flirting would do is tire u out. Especially someome like him who has never done it. Like i said the system makes no sense and will just be a plot device to force the mc into dumb plota because the author isnt creative enough to make the character fall into that setting naturally.
This Needs Serious Editing before becoming readable ! So many grammatical mistakes ! World background is almost non-existent ! Too much focus explanations on every useless thing(explanations mostly are all boring so they must explain necessary stuff and shorten it as much as possible leaving place for plot, but here its complete opposite), but when it comes to about necessary things giving explanation about how mc chose and worked in his now chosen profession with all damn time skips and especially power levels there is None. Since they were in orphanage there was never mentioned what power levels they reached accurately and on what power levels were their enemies. Action and Skills needs also huge improvement and better explanation, but with this horrible writing quality everything is Useless, Unreadable !
The translation quality is quite good but the story ruins it. Literally, I feel like the mc is just a bit too stupid and it doesn't fit his ten thousand some year mental age. Most of the side characters and cannon fodders are 1D. The World Background could be described in one word infinite. Like the author could write 1 million chapters on the world itself. There is no real goal in the novel besides take revenge for every petty little things the mc had suffer in his previous life. We are talking about 10000 years of history here. All in all this novel is just trash. Garbage worse than Trump's Coronavirus prevention campaign.