Revenge and hate, this is the main theme that author used to write this story. it felt simple and cliche but still interesting. How cliche is it? MC is orphaned and raised by monster, and it killed by human, so he started to hate human and kill them because of it. What make it interesting is how good the execution is. Its not about "look the MC is going to take revenge and start to killing human," but its about "The MC has killed human, so what is the consequence to that child as human? for being a murderer of the same species?"The MC has killed some human, and the family of the human he killed is trying to chase him too. This is where world building and character development works, and author did not disappoint.
Hlo fellow novel readers, this is great and good novel with everything fromWriting to story. But is has far too less chapters for me, as I already have caught with latest chapters. Can anyone recommend more novel like this as I only have one in my mind. But it also just started and has less chapters but got a great potential. If you wannna check it out. Don’t forget to like my review if you find that story good.NameHolographic Conjuring SyatemHey, don,t forget my like on this review. This book got 2 chapters for now but still great so far.
All in all for me, this was an alright read up till chapter 79.
It was a refreshing read, compared to other books I have read.
However, it isn't really my cup of tea. To be honest I don't really have any problems with the book. I just don't like the MC much, the MC's values and my values just don't... Click. She is fairly annoying in my opinion, quite often, so it put me off. This isn't to say that the character is bad, I just don't like her. The story is from the MC's point of view so i don't like the story. I ended up wishing she would die towards the last few chapters that I read. So, I decided to do the mature thing and just stop reading. If you don't like something you don't like a something. Doesn't mean that thing is bad, YOU just don't like it. That you in this situation was me.
However, before I left, I wanted to say how much I enjoyed the book. It was easy to read even with a few grammar mistakes and thus, enjoyable. So give the book a try, you never know, it may just catch your liking. ^_^
Just so were clear this is a review of the the first 79 chapters nothing else.
The translation is good. This story too is good for he loss and the games are realistic in my opinion and I think the nationalism here is lessen. I don't know, I have not yet read at the point where he you know go to America. Good job for the translation though..
This book is really interesting, it has a slow pace and good character development, a likable Mc:after chapter 20?, anyway there are barely any grammar mistakes and very good tenses, well done author you have my full attention.
the synopsis was great, till I realized it was marked with a harem tag... ..that really puts my head offbecause harem generally indicates that every other girl is definitely under him.... spawning with everyone infact... ..every other chapter...... I have read one such book n it's was .....eye opener. ..ig...... ?
Plot seems very interesting and the novel has the potential to get really big as the author is not only amazing at writing but somehow is also great at writing in a way that makes reading the novel more fun... like its hard to explain so I think you should read take a read as well!
I like it! Good luck on your exams!!
Cliché1. Gets cheat2. Gets OP super baby angel3. Gets OP 4. Stomps in everything in his way5. Nothing can stop himThere's not plot development, it's just him following his systems instructions like a life oath. No Character development as well, he's just stereotypical handsome MC that abuses his system like a wife.No world background except the regular beasts everywhere, abyss bad.
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The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future.One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.
Mc has young master syndrome and it seems everyone else has it too.The mcs girlfriend is engaged with another man and the girlfriend insist on taking his boyfriend of 1 week(the mc) as his husband its basically all that