Demon Thrall

very bad Alex...i cant wait for something unexpected to come in Averys life where Lex will be so jealous & regretful to the bones...

Cool story with good worldbuilding and side characters. The prevalent and major issue that ruins the book for me is the sheer stupidity of the MC, born with an IQ rivaling the rocks he resides in, he seems unable to think for himself and use his abilities and system in an efficient way. Another major problem is the inconsistency of the system's point system. The value of items and knowledge of things in the system shop fluctuates wildly to where a couple of shovels and a single coin cost as much as getting a fully functional human body. You could buy basic knowledge of every language in the multiverse, or you could get a farming toolset... Overall I believe the cool and interesting setting and universe are ruined by an incompetent lead.

this is my first time seeing so many negative comments on a novel ? and I also join them when we have to pay from chapter 9 itself

This Needs Serious Editing before becoming readable ! So many grammatical mistakes ! World background is almost non-existent ! Too much focus explanations on every useless thing(explanations mostly are all boring so they must explain necessary stuff and shorten it as much as  possible leaving place for plot, but here its complete opposite), but when it comes to about necessary things giving explanation about how mc chose and worked in his now chosen profession with all damn time skips and especially power levels there is None. Since they were in orphanage there was never mentioned what power levels they reached accurately and on what power levels were their enemies. Action and Skills needs also huge improvement and better explanation, but with this horrible writing quality everything is Useless, Unreadable !

everything is great , except the updates...i want moreee pleaseeeeeee14000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

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