I love the beginning of the story and cant wait to see how it progresses. But there were a few boring chapters and uninteresting fights. The mc lets people force themselves onto him, which I dislike( not demon lord behavior). Most of the subordinates either will desire revenge or help with their personnel problems dragging the mc into more troublesome situations. All I can foresee is the mc playing hero or recruiting more baggage. There are also times the mc seems stupid and takes unnecessary decisions/actions.
It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me)Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.
Literally only writing a review in response to the summery / "about" page. "But as he ascends, Leon faces a profound question: in a world where power is everything, will he stay true to his charitable heart, or be tempted to exploit the system for himself?"HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF PAVLOV! WHAT DO YOU FUCKING MEAN!Dude literally gets rewarded for doing good non-stop. See a starving orphan? Ring that bell Pavlov.
best among equals you can't drop it till you are through with the stort
here is the shameless author giving his own book a 5 star rating.??
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"Its makes sense," said Mamat.
I was me! This body, this mind, it was all mine, no one can take it from me.
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"Yup, been everything...A dragon, a fairy, a demon.....And hopefully forever, an immortal."