hi, everyone author here, this novel is going to be my first but i hope you all support me in this journey and enjoy with me a new action adventure fantasy based story.
Amazing novel .
great so far but question Is if the author Is about to drop it after few hundered chapters like every novel he ever worked on? Like really just stop writting at this point if you drop one.more
I really love this book. So captivating and educating. I still don’t understand why people judged John by what his father did. Obviously, he is innocent. Even if his father had committed the crime, it shouldn’t be used against him. Is Estefania different from Lucia or is there a glitch.
It's a fun twist in the system and a gatcha cheat but the cheat is spaced out enough to where it doesn't feel like he's the world's strongest without trying. The only reason i ranked this at 3 stars would be with 136 chapters in, the synopsis mentioned harem and we haven't seen even romance since the academy. I will probably re-evaluate once the romance starts again but I'm not optimistic.
keep writing keep writing keep writing. This joint will be groundbreaking for years to come.
The shameless author here ??Writing a review for your book is sort of shameful, so I'll just clarify some things. Oh and by the way, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!I am more than happy to answer each one of you!!!- "First of all, what is this book about?" Well, It's about a guy named Atenzi who used to live in our planet, but after his death, he was chosen as a wildcard and got sent to another universe called Universe X.To be more precise, he was sent to Naaim, a planet similar to ours, plus some mythological creatures, and historical figures as evil leaders or benevolent wisemen.- "What type of guy is Atenzi?" He is very disciplined but doubts himself a lot.But as the story goes, he trusts himself more.I f I had to define him in a sentence, it would be that he is the definition of the indomitable human spirit.You'll like him, I promise.- "Will he be overpowered?" Yes and no. Sometimes Atenzi can score easy wins, but most of the time, no.He relies immensely on his high IQ/battle IQ, and knowledge from Earth about several martial arts, philosophies, and other things.Yes, he is like a nerd who can fight and has a strong will.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but it is indirect and very rare.- "Will there be a Harem? Definitely not.- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing two to three chapters every day. - "Why would you rate your book 5 stars huh?"Well, a person has to motivate and encourage himself!If you don't believe in your craft then no one will.I know I am a new author, and I probably make a lot of mistakes when it comes to writing, but I still believe that, story and plot twist-wise, my book is great! It is my first work and definitely not the last one!- Finally, enjoy the novel, and post a review if you can, whether good or bad, it will help me become a better author, a better version of my current self!Yours truly, Innocence.
This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops ?
This is really a good story. The world is vast, there are many races but the focus will be on humans for a long time, the system is very interesting, there are many mysteries and secrets, the protagonist is not an idiot. He is very young at the beginning and learns from his mistakes. By all indications, this is a work in which the harem will be good, it will not be forced with love at first sight and beauties to bring down kingdoms by throwing themselves at the protagonist's feet wherever he goes. The MC won't have burdens to carry, getting in his way or saving his partner from some lecherous young masters (at least for now). To be honest, the MC path is pretty lonely for a long time, don't expect a protagonist with friends. The MC is not a nice guy who goes out to save people, but if he can help someone and if it doesn't get in the way of his plans, he will. I didn't like it (with mini spoilers): The author tends to exaggerate the information and explanations about some things and some people. Sometimes it gets a little tiring. About the first harem girl... it was weird. A 17 year old girl with a super seductive body falling in love and even setting up a scheme to "marry" a 12 year old boy. It's okay if he or she were 15, but that's not the case. The cultivation world is very cruel, we all know, but in this story, a good-hearted cultivator is a heavenly treasure. The quality of writing needs to improve. 5* :-)
The content of the earlier chapters is quite low yet it has an interesting and very intriguing story... Keep up with the updates.
Can tell what novel is ch 415………………….
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??