This looks very promising, I've only read a few chapters and i'm hooked. You have to check it out, it's really good, nice work author!?
Yo everyone, it's me, the Stache himself, and yes, I've got a new book.It's a little experiment of mine, hopefully the results will be interesting.Expect a book filled with drama, tragedy, reactions, and regret. You will cry.—P.S. The concept was inspired by 'The Reincarnated Villain Makes The Heroines Tearfully Beg for Forgiveness,' so there's no need to mention it.
Story is good as i read so far but I don't like the mc suffer more than his brothers, so I want in ongoing chapter that he at least pays back what his brothers did by broking their limbs one by one and also move the story fast, because story progress is very slow
One of the shameless author review.I think you like the story and character.
As of now I dub thee my favorite of stories and am officially adding it to my Favorites playlist. Note: I have less than 10 books on this list of the 1000+ I’ve read ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
A bit weird, way to start the story, but it was fine, hoping that this continues into a more dynamic story later.
Bro maybe it’s just me but I don’t understand half of this. Maybe I skipped something but you never explained the past lives, and the power system is everywhere, but none of these things compar to the character interaction they make no sense. It’s like you shuffled ur chapters
a hidden gem how this story is buried here idk, but im happy finding this novel. hope author keep updating
follow a guy who claims he will be the villain. When you read the villain Mc tag you are sure that the mc will be a villain then you get to see a hero mc with a bad personality. You wait and wait thinking it will get better because there was a villain tag the mc might turn into a mc villain but no what awaits you is pure dissappointment
the author is good at writing a novel to pique my interest with all the mystery in here.
FL is very stupid and ML is too controllling and unreasonable
Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.Updating stability is ok.World background is good.All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.