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I rarely write reviews but this whole story was a massive disappointment. Going into this I thought it would be really good due to the amount of 5 star reviews and the concept of the novel however I was quickly disappointed. There a three main issues that I have with this novel1. The author has a weird grasp of economics, the way the currency was setup up had problems from the beginning however these could be overlooked until the author decided to start adding USD conversion at which point everything went downhill. For perspective the author claims that maids in the MCs family get paid a relatively high wage of 1 gold a month. However the author later says that 1,000 gold = $10,000 (1 gold = $10) meaning that the maids make less than 1/560 of the average monthly salary in the US. This could maybe make sense if the MC was in a third world country where labor costs were low however the MC is the son of the richest family in the world and obviously does not live in a poor area. I got past this point however and kept reading, however shortly after when the MC introduces chess it is priced at 100 bronze per set which would be $0.001 per set. You can buy ramen in most gas stations for $1 meaning 1 ramen noodles container = 1,000 chess sets. Make it make sense. Again this would maybe be fine if the author didn’t bring up the amount the MC made in USD repeatedly. 2. The MC tries to implement modern social practices that do not make sense in a medieval setting onto this world (e.g. The MC tries to force all the house staff to work a maximum of 8 hours per day and no more, great thought except it makes no sense in a medieval society where work hours are determined by sunrise and sunset) 3. Cringe / Cliche. Everything seems to always work out perfectly for the MC with little to no effort, MC follows reincarnator 101 on steroid template to make money using modern ideas but has an AI that does all the work and creates perfect blueprints. What really irked me though was the MC just straight up giving away the soap recipe to other people because he didn’t want to hurt their business and wanted everyone to live peacefully and happily. Verdict: Had and has potential, author should rewrite what they have an try again. Would not recommend reading until the author makes some edits and fixes some of the biggest issues specifically the currency.
This looks like an apocalyptic game! And if the plot was big enough, it certainly would deserve to be turned into a game!
Good Job!Keep up the good work.A wonderful read.
I have a nice feeling about the book. Quite interesting. please continue to update the book, author. ?
I don't know what to say here. Just read it and you know it. Don't need to be explained. From the synopsis and the first few chapters, you will know what kind of novel this is. Just read it.
Liked the narration style which pretty much looks like a game; the pace was slightly fast but it's okay for the build-up as these are starting chapters. Now waiting for more plot twists!
Raws please!!
The concept of this story is cool and very different, after reading the first chapter I'm definitely hooked. only downside is that it need more chapters lol. great read
This novel is a hidden gem! The story is engaging from the very beginning, with interesting characters and a plot that keeps you hooked. The writing is clear and easy to follow, making it a quick and enjoyable read. If you're looking for something fun and memorable, I highly recommend giving this one a try!
Esto definitivamente no es una reseña para una entrada gratis.
once again, I will rate this book.. it has the tragedy I'm looking for but please don't keep us hanging.. we need to know what will happen