Imperium: Contractus

good story and good character building with solid future potential and can be developed further by having system

This book Is a master piece. I recommend that you read it. In other novels, the “Evil MC” is most of the time not evil at all. This novel’s MC is pure evil and thats what i like about thid nobel.

Give this one a four star review! Having read it before, I can never stop wondering WHAT happens NEXT!!shame the last update was right before the coronavirus outbreak. hope nothing happened. ?

The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book.Only issue would be punctuation.the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.

The Author here. If i don't rate it 5 stars who will?. Do please leave comments, I like to read them and more often then not they give ideas how to develop the story.

Much of the story doesn't make sense - at first.  Why is all the fighting turn-based?  Why do beasts still live after being killed?  Why are so many characters dumb?  Why do beast tamers get a monthly allowance?  Replace the phrase 'spirit beast' with Pokimons and it makes more sense.  All the main characters are children.