I was getting attached to Oliver, but....
not bad...........................
The book is well-written. It's very detailed which makes it easier to imagine what the place in the story looks like and what is happening with the main character. It might be a little bit slow-paced but it's quite acceptable since the story is just starting. Upload more chapters and keep writing.
Great, straight and very stable book so far... Not sure it will reach the great heights of author's previous books but it is going along well... Would have been unique if his Dimensional Clones were connected by a hive mind to the first clone... And as he improve he would have to improve his brainwave... This way the Dimensional Clones feel unique and not like every other clone out there...
Not a bad read, I find it enjoyable yesThe exposition to begin with tho kinda threw me off other than that it's good. Looking forward to see how the story develops to intrigue me
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Interesting book, look forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work!
Great story but wish it update more frequently
Shancai:"to the pharmacy..I have to get some pills for it."
LENT C LOUS vs MEC MANOn this one MEC MAN gang tried to get a hold of there opponent but it was not possible because LENT C LOUS gang has trained very much for the compition
"ahh..uh" Croc grumbled as he began to get up, finally remembering what happened he roared and rushed into battle.
My sis was checking b'day cards for my bro as his b'day was nearing. While I was checking, we two were the only person other than the owner. While I was checking out the palace the owner told me that he would help me if he needed anything. The owner suddenly touched my shoulder, I tried to shrug off but he was stronger than me. I thought it was normal courtesy of the people here and didn't say anything. But he started touching me again and again which started to disgust me. The person was quite old and I thought if I said anything it would anger him. So instead of telling anything I used all my strength and ran to my sis. Then he told me to come again. I was so scared that from than in if anyone touched me other than my family I would always jerk off. It was like a phobia for me. But after meeting Jack whenever he touched I didn't feel to jerk off.