Ascendancy: The System’s Chosen

From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription. Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!

Untrustworthy translator. In chapter 660 he replaced text to make political commentary and political remarks on current modern politics, even though the MC's origins take place in our distant future.Not only did this break the immersion the author tried to immerse us in, but the original RAW also did not include any of this. Whoever was responsible for adding this-- you, your editors or someone else. you allowed it to stay thus unnecessarily painting a bad light on this entire novel. I read fantasy to get away from the real world not so I can be engaged in it.

The MTL sucks. Should’ve used a better translator

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This review is written after reading the latest chap at this moment. (Chapter 7)I'm not the type of person who casually gives a half-hearted review to please others and I'm brutally honest about it... Perhaps...Anyway, the writing quality is quite good and there were no major mistakes that could take one away from their reading immersion aside from a few tense shifts. But the latter can be worked on through editing.5 for story development. There were no forced interactions and everything seemed logical so far. Just that, the gods felt so weak in my opinion.Characters aren't fleshed out yet and this might be because of the lack of chapters. This includes the MC himself. <- This opinion may change depending on how the author approaches this point.Update Stability 5Aside from the characters, the setting wasn't properly explained yet. Again, this might be because of the lack of chapters. But the good thing is that I can see development in this area.All in all, this book has the potential to reach top 100 for originals (based on my experience). Only of course, if the book manages to get its well-deserved attention.

"Humans, I don't recommend you stray too far. There is a blockade ahead."