Please review and comment as you read. Hopes you enjoy the story.
All I can say is Peak!!!!the Lovecraftian elements pulled me in, the grammar and overall writing made me stay and now, the world building and lore keeps me begging for more chaps.only 7 chapters in and I'm glad I gave this work a chance.please author, don't drop this.this work has the potential for greatness. ✨
As a fan of anime, I love the way the story makes me feel like watching a movie.
Thank you for the masterclass !! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sharing my thoughts about my novel-This novel is about an introverted character transported to another world with the system power, his class is also the weakest, a botanist, making it harder for him to become stronger.-MC is very awkward and realistic, I am trying to make him not look edgy but enough to be funny.-The first 10 chapters seems like they are different in writing, I am just a beginner writer and very new to creating a novel that's why I had a hard time figuring out how I should write, but after the 9th chapter I finally decided to stay simple.-English is my 2nd language, making it hard for me to see some small errors, but I use grammarly to double check my writing.-I am not expecting my novel to be that good but I'll try to write more and improve along the story.
I'm just here to write a review because the author's sheer confidence. It's something I haven't seen in a long time. Fun Joke: Dad on his death bed: Son, I have to tell you somethingSon under his breath: I bet I’m adoptedDad: You were ado...Dad diesSon: Knew itDad wakes up: You were adorable as a babyDad diesSon: A***, thats so sweetDad wakes up: That’s why we adopted you
So far I really like this story. I hope FL will mature with time with each of her partner (that they will respect her and her decisions). The only minus is the long time for update. This story has potential and I really hope that Author-sama will update more chapters.
Okay, so I hardly like romance. And this is one of those hardly liked ones. I would recommend people to read it. They will like it. Also, Author-san, please use the auxiliary chapters for interactions with people.
"Mr. Dark contacted you, sir," Lilith answered.
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But they did not expect that just by breaking the enchantments they were now young again and immortal, and now they could rule the Kingdom of Glory together for a better world.
My heart was reaching its limit again...