KiritoSenpai9138
Very good book, I haven’t seen many, if any, books like this.
Author here, started writing for fun and just to improve my writing, there is a lot I could do with the story. If you enjoy, comments are appreciated. Chapters daily, for updates you can follow my twitter @MonamaAuthor
book will take you to a romantic ride and some chapters are dark guyss
Story looks promising hoping Mc will unite india under one banner and make a empire with colonies very excited for future chapters
Yeah, it's a five-star read. If I had to describe this WN in one word, it would be underrated. It deserves more attention and recognition. The author has a knack for writing, and while it's still too early to say much about the story, the writing is solid. Keep it up—I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. You've gained a loyal reader, and you’ll probably see my comments on every chapter (maybe).
Really really really good yuri Novel.For me, who likes yuri, this is the good novel.
I can't bro imma stop right now because if I don't I will get a cliff hanger because it currently has only 11 chapters! This is soooo good! I can't explain it it's just that-! I can feel the momentum ya know? like the aura and the atmosphere of place and the people and how Mr. Passerby-Swordsman just appears and shows who's the boss!The names are good too and easy to remember and the writing style? Perfect!
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
Hello i am the writer of the first one and I gave too lookism mostly because I wasn’t feeling it no more I’m working on a new book so if you did enjoy that brief story check it out. Okay now a real review the story so far is good he didn’t just copy and paste the 13 chapters he made his so I like that
Interesting storyline, engaging and excited. MC is a bit on the unpredictive and stuborn side surrounded by his followers. Going back to the times when everything started, MC try his best to correct his past mistakes and developed his teritory and protect his family.
Wow, the cover is just....And the novel looks so good like there is a lot of magic, and characters, znd also the male character getting stronger step by step and He dominates the world...Can't wait for that
