Truly a great premise indeed! First chapter in and this is an interesting read. I love the writing and vivid descriptions. Can't wait to see where the story takes us.
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5 star all the way!! the comedy is gold and really loved the premise! faster updates!!!
there isn’t enough to completely review it, but I’ll review it for now. The first few chapters seem pretty good; the prologue was interesting and the first two chapters were pretty good. I imagine this to be a slow burner but I hope not. Let’s see how it goes.
Good book so far but where are the system rewards ? or how are they being used ?
very nice book, this book is like about a woman who saves somebody (i think so his brother). forgive me if i told wrong because i am still reading :)
A really well written, kingdom building story, they take the usual tropes of gatcha, and the LitRPG and kind of refined them in a way that is refreshing. However, the pacing may be a bit slow for many people, personally I enjoyed it, as the story never feels like it loses track of itself, nor brushes aside, earlier elements this way. Also, there is something satisfying about seeing Atlas’s incremental growth. One thing I would like to see is a chapter dedicated to pulling back the “camera” and examining the world. Or even a golossary style chapter at the beginning. With all these stories and different power systems, being able to refrence something would be nice. Another worry I have, that is inherent with this genre and the Gatcha mechanic, is that characters get lost in the mix and story, as more and more characters are introduced, some older characters get accidentally pushed aside. Sometimes even forgotten and overwritten with another. So far, the author has not done that and has given each character time to shine. Just hope they keep it up.Great work author! Can’t wait for more.
Nice novel keep it coming . thou a lot need to be made to the book
I would first like to say thank you for your hard work for making this heart warming story. I really appreciate it ,deserves more support .The characters are really interesting and you give importance to every character and that's what I like the most of your novel . I like Ryan's character so much . He's so cool.? The story has so much emotions and feelings rather than any mature content. I've been always waiting for the updates. So update soon author.?
Absolutely incredible novel, never gets boring and always something happening to put you on the edge and want to read more, I recommend this novel, one of the best ever put on this platform!!!
After diving into the first chapters of "I Must Kill the Gods
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