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Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
Don't drop please...................,......,...
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I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
Great story although i would reccommend the author that a better cover and name can do wonders for this story...............................................
Hey we are really expecting this story to get picked and look at this even after this many times are it's first pilot read dubut the editor still hasn't uploaded the views of the readers of this book on its page
I find this fun and interesting. Not many books have the Main focus more in the dream aspect of things. It’s fun. Interesting. Refreshing. I am giving it a 5 star for the author to keep writing.
for a second I thought that this novel was romantic ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
this is the most well done and unique of the lot ???. The quality is mediocre at best, but compared to the other stuff I'm just giving it a 5. I think my dao heart is breaking hopefully I can pass this tribulation and find another treasure through these trials.
CRITICAL REVIEWI'm critical, but I'm lenient enough to give 5s if it is entertaining or written well. You deserve it! Although its going to be a 4.8!Read 113 chaps (which is basically current as of this review).To be honest, I don't reach much anti-hero stories of ruthless MCs on the level of like revered insanity so it was a refreshing read. Well actually this story is as the title says "Life of a Villain". For this MC, he's definitely a villian than a anti-hero. Writing quality - pretty much almost no errors really. If there's a unneeded complaint that would be for it have more descriptive in writing. It's already done enough to convey its point and most importantly its a web novel. This ain't no published book you find from a bookstore.Story development- Good pacing but a little on the slow side. The later the chapters, the faster it goes. It has clichés' sure, but its definitely an above average cultivation novel. I would definitely recommend it.Its interesting to see an the MC ruthlessly cut all paths and makes sure that his enemy, the novel's protagonist, absolutely can't ever stand against him. Character wise, the story does only try to flesh out the real major characters. Key word is try. On the other hand, because of the pacing and chaos, it does feel that side characters are left out. I don't think that's a bad thing. For this author's story this is sufficient and particularly due to one major circumstance: the MC has his cheat, but also has many resources from the getgo which other cultivation stories force the MC to slowly get.As for my favourite character, probably only the Sect Master of Eternal Palace. Much like other characters in his position, we only really see events that force him to come for plot convenience. However, its refreshing and somewhat unique seeing a smart sect master making the wise choice to side with the mc. Even though he doesn't have much feelings for him and is basically forced to.The dynamic of the MC and the protagonist is something that I will continue to enjoy in the series.As for other characters, surprisingly meh. I will reiterate: most of the characters in the novel only feel that they are there to serve their purpose. I won't deny the story plot is interesting, and they fulfil their role well, but as a consequence that's what they end up feeling like and its been 100 chaps. It might be an inevitable consequence, World Background. It's a huge world. Lots of connections between places influencing the three realms already in 100 chaps. Downside? Due to the story's nature, the actual individual places and stuff in the world is not fleshed out. I still will give it a 5 tho after all, it's good enough for what this story is trying to tell.Love the story though! And will continue to read it~~Hoping to find a heroine to ship as I usually do in harem stories.
Hahaha, I love this book. The beginning in fact was so well written with no punctuation errors. The ideas, character design, story development, world background ?. My little dragon is easily an amazing author, also the penalty for failing to complete the quest ???that was hilarious.Harsh but hilarious.The descriptions caught me off guard, they were so gruesome and precise. I mean come on, onions really? For someone like me who's imagination is at its peak, I couldn't have explained her death better myself.Lastly, the MC's name is unique. Ruby, eh? Hmmm, now that I think about it, it was a crystal that helped him escape death's door. If the crystal had been red it would be a perfect synchronization with his name.So little information in the first chapter but anyone could tell how much he loves his family.Once again. I. LOVE. THIS. BOOK.It's amazing, keep it up Author.If you remain consistent, I can assure you that this book would have a large fanbase in the future ?