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i cant believe i am saying that, but its surprisingly good,, i wasn't bored at all reading and got me looking forward to read more,,, its your op mc in a doomsday type world,,probably kingdom building in future chapters.. all in all its simple and exciting at the same time... no plot hole so far,, good translation, an alright world background. not a 5 stars story but a well deserve 4 stars for the first 60 chapters... if anyone know if this has a raw please give me the raw name so i can look it up...
I don’t know where to start. I guess I should with the most pressing issue, the translation.Review from chapter 39, I’m not a fan.Apparently it was translated by the same people/person that translated ‘The Tycoon God of Online Gaming’. But at least there, it was tolerable. I don’t know if it was the quality of translation or the story, but it might be the latter.Ok, the story. The story is kind of everywhere right now and they don’t go much into detail about the main character and his problems. They only do an overview of it before continuing the story and the bad translations don’t help. They mention other parties but never explain who they are as more parties keep appearing. There are maybe 4-6 different groups of people that are mentioned and I only know stuff about like 2 of them. The other ones seem to be foreshadowing or something but they have only been mentioned once or twice before someone else appears.If you read already I’m talking about the guys who aimed to steal the box, the person who has a boss and the guy who set up the evolution thing and may marry the boss, and the wolves. Those are just some of them.The last one, the wolves are kinda acceptable because it was near the end of the 39 chapters and you get to know a little bit but even then, the author tried to hide every single character behind the scenes with a mysterious mist that ruins the story progression because theres too many of them. It’s also really confusing.And to where the story is headed, not really sure. Just join games and get stronger I’m guessing while all this other stuff happens around him.Ok the writing, as in, the way things play out. Not talking about the story but how fights scenes go and interactions are. They are okay. They may have been slightly changed because of the translations but the humor and the way the main character interacts with other characters and NPCs, is meh.The main characters personality is pretty normal. Oh you want to kill me? Hah! I’ll kill you. Spare you? Nah. He has a hint of arrogance, only a hint, and a lot of energy. Like a stereotypical YouTuber.Basically, I don’t like it, not how the writing goes or the way the author is making things play out. There are certainly others who likes this novel, I’m not one of them.Have a good day, peace.
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Recently found this hidden treasure and I've got to say for what it's worth it's an amazing concept and story. The only down side is how it's no longer being updated but if the author doesn't want to be posting on it it's their choice and I wont argue still amazing in my book either way
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Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is.Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity.Updating stability is ok.World background is good.All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.
Starts off really well, I don't remember the last time I read something thats interest me. great job