JaneSmitten
The book has potential to provide an expanding story. It has a classic concept of online games story but it's approach with the concept introduce in the prologue. Can't wait to see how this story would go.
Honestly I'm more than willing to wait for the full chapters
The author clearly made effort with the writing, which is appreciated in a sea of mistranslations. So far, good pacing, nice creativity, and we can see a bit of a cliché story, but it's been approached nicely! Keep it up
Wow, you've created absolutely mesmerizing worlds! The way you are developing the main character is nothing short of marvelous. Each character comes to life with all their unique characteristics, making them feel like real people in your story. It's truly impressive how you've crafted such a captivating and immersive experience. thx
This is one of my favorite dragon novel i just like who fluently the story go and i like the fact that there is no systeme that destroy the balance of the world. The caracter are good and the world is well made even if we dont have to mutch info dump witch i appreciate. I love this story please more chapter soon!!
reviewing for the event fp keep up the good work
Damn the first scene slapped me. I was not expecting that. I like the starting and i would definitely read more. I felt that it was a little rushed in the first chapter, but I go the hang of it with time. Im gonna drop in to see where it goes when more chapters come out.
well, it has been quite engaging so far. it has potential too. imma keep tap on this for a while.
I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it
"Snake’s Survival Guide" is a solid read. It’s funny and has a creative take on the reincarnation genre. I recommend giving it a chance if you enjoy fantasy with a bit of humor.
To be honest the story seemed to have a lot of potential but as I kept reading the more annoyed I got with how slowly the story was developing, the worst part is that so far there are 9 Main characters which is the biggest reason for the slow development of the story, I love that there are 9 of them since they all have their unique journey to go through as well as different powers and fights as well as specialties but that caused the story to develop at an extremely slow pace. I already caught up with the story to chap 775 but I feel as if I only ready 100 chapters worth of actual content. It feels like I’m watching Naruto all over again it’s show being 90% fillers.
people complain a lot about the MC being a beta but I don't see anything there, people should looked at MCs as imperfect, if they aren't how do you expect any character development! Ride on Author!
