Personally I love an isekai like no other, very intriguing in any case
So far so gud. I've almost caught up with the latest chap uwu really enjoying it. Raiden is quite an interesting character, my personal favorite. The best thing I like about him is that he doesn't flush the toilet :)
Writing quality is bad, mc is really creepy, in his previous life he was 18 and now he's 10 and is falling in love with 10/9 yo girls. On the other hand adults act really weird (like letting 10yo kids go hunting in the forest), maybe we should just be like "eh it's eroge game world logic" but for me there is no logic in this novel. I got only up to chapter 10, think what you want.
The scenes and the writing quality is amazing.
This story had lots of potential until 1. author created a ridiculous plot armour that keep saving him in critical situations and the plot armour makes no sense2. The main character have little emotion doesn’t3. The main character is a saint who never kills those who wants to kill him4. The academy makes no sense i feel that it holding him back he shouldn’t have join the academy5. The story is repetitive for example there some crazy villain who are jelous of him and want to use everything in his power to destroy him but after heing defeated by the protagonist a few times the become protagonist underline which makes no sense as they have powerful backings who can literally destroy the protagonist6. The villain are brain dead they have many ways to make mc suffer and destroy him but they chose the most idiotic way which is to fight him one by one head on I feel like the villain can kipnap his aunt and threaten him that would make it more interesting
The start was good but when he came back to earth the story last its charm.
liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly
there is no explanation of how he became power you just write several hours later, he has unlocked the first circle or about the world we don't really know anything about it, the book he read in the library for example he don't have content of what he read also he characters feel 1 dimensional
Four things:1) This novel will bind you like a snake and won’t let you go.2) Read the auxiliary chapters because they’re worth it.3) if you’re not hooked, I think your brain isn’t working. Have you considered visiting a psychologist? 4) I know you will ask this so, here is a possible answer: This most likely won’t be a harem, so stop annoying the author with that question. (Tags exist for a reason after all).And… I have ascended through the 200 Heavens through devouring this novel and became the first Usurper of Totality titled: Chaos.(I said so, so it’s totally canon).Watch as the next generation overtake me!
What's going on with the translator? Has he quit? Being replaced? On a break? Need at least some note or something so I know not to bother looking out for a new one any time soon.
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