Pukha_Jimo
The synopsis was catchy and attractive, and the cover was all new york times bestseller worthy ? the story focuses on the sister's bond but the tension that grows with one of the sister's connection with the second character leo. The characters feel real, like blue period ? the writer does not shy away from exploring different aspects of the story. It is an exceptional story with an amazing plotline. Totally recommend and kudos to the author!
The story has few chapters yet but... Well!! It's a good start, i'm curious to read more!!
I like the concept of the story. And it has potential. But when the 'damsel in distress' scenario happens in chapter 4 itself, it's so disappointing. And the way the MC speaks to other women just irks me.What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot.Another novel with potential got ruined.
This story has a lot of potential and desire not liking the system I really like this story. Cant wait to see what else author comes up with
there is some problem in writing quality but overall it deserves four star
here is a review for you can but I can get it printed in a clean envelope and get it done by tomorrow
"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.
"What? I don't know what are you talking about magician." Doctor Jack staring at me with his creepy face.
"Help? Ha ha ha, you're funny."
I smiled and wave my hand a little.
"Please Raito-san, please!~~"
Congratulations for such an amazing movel.I hope your continue with it.?
