One of the best starts of a novel in a long timeI am quite impressed seeing this quality of work from an amature writer. One rarely sees this level of writing skill and attention to detail in most novels. Its very difficult to make characters believable and alive and by the end of 39 there are 3 character I felt a human connect with the mc, his sister and mother. This is quite an accomplishment as many books are not even able to create a believable mc with 50+ characters. I genuinely felt empathy for these characters. I am not trying to glaze the author but I truly respect authors who are able to do this. I really hope this continues.I also appreciate how intresting the power mc has. Its not a typical system which gives everything to the mc for free. There is actually a cost to strength. And a believable way for mc to develope a more reserved personality. Finally I believe everyone should give this book a try and support the author. We can’t allow this hidden gem to go unnoticed any longer.
Well-crafted prose with immersive descriptions and a strong narrative voice. Engaging setup with a rich historical backdrop and an unfolding mystery. The protagonist is compelling, but supporting characters could be more developed. Unique lore inspired by Filipino culture enhances immersion.A gripping fantasy with a well-built world and intriguing magic system. Definitely worth following!
your story is masterpeace characters development is attractive hook readers for more keep going it is good work and i will rate it so far 5 star.
Had potential but the author only posts privileged chapters now so you have to pay like 800 coins just to read it
Dear Author, I am you have a potential to write a story which. But your story seems like a paragraph or eassy to me.I mean I can read it, but some part are so confusing . ( Although I recommend you to copy my writing style . Where,when a certain individual talk < "...Bold..." >Again it's not about my story promotion or anything it's just u can copy my writing style. Which will help your reader to connect with your story . Unlike your ( Fantasy genre) mine are Bit more like ( Modern -Urban Genre)/ Vampire Queen : Fated love. ( No need to read full or anything. Just read ch 1 .)And try to write....... ( I love fantasy Modern military genre where Mc can't use magic but has IQ or weapons)( Mc will wear like t shirt and pant like Boys in our world . not that royaity dress or fantasy dress)
This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops ?
This is an excellent book, the writing is perfect and story/world development is good. the only downside comes from the lack of vivid character description and this author has a tendency to start a book and even if it's going well, abandon it so dont't put too much hope on the book. It has 5 chaps at time of writing this review
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Im very captivated by this book, I cant wait to see how the story develops.I recently stopped reading another book because one of the main characters died, I hope this writer doesnt lose the plot like that.Im very invested in Angel's story, shes funny and brave.
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Can you continue with this story l really love how you developed this story and the plot is also amazing because its been 1 month since your update the story
The story seems an interesting one with a lot of upcoming twists , the character's background's unfolding will surely make the story interesting, can't wait to see how the story will unfold .