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third time rereading through the chapters. very good story that makes hungry. more ways then one.
If you're tired of predictable, plot-armored protagonists always coming out on top, this novel offers a refreshing change of perspective. The villainous character's cunning schemes and ability to turn the tables on the typical protagonists make for a thrilling read, and the protagonists' suffering adds an extra layer excitement. Highly recommended for readers seeking a unique and compelling take on the classic protagonist-villain dynamic.
Okay, I don’t even know where to start, this author’s books are just wonderful!! If you are looking for romance that would make you smile to yourself and feel the love in the air, please check out this book. I highly recommend it to those who like slow meaningful romance. This author is one of my favorite on this app and I always find myself coming back to check for updates! I have read her other books, and trust me, they are wonderful because they made me cry and laugh! ??
The Quality and story keeps on improving! Although there are grammar errors when FMC chanted it didn't ruin the story at all. Please make more updates faster!
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Here it is the author! A shameless review.This novel belongs to the series called The Criminals. And it is obvious because of the name. Anyway, this story it will totally different from the first one because this plot it is happening on the Sapphire Island, an artificial island were a prison and a small village it is located. Now, this artificial islands it is completely different from Ruby City and Garnet City because of the two things mentioned earlier.On this series you will meet Lenard, together with a new Rodriguez, and two new characters, Henry and Abou. Now these people are here for different reason, but they have the same goal, get stronger to survive or try your luck to escape this place.
This novel is excellentThis is a original novel which is pretty rare as it is.Recommend 100%__________________________________________________________________
Esto es lo que no me gustó de esta lectuta:soft ntr, con esto me refiero a que una heroína es dejada en ropa interior y manoseada.El mismo protagonista observó todo el proceso para que según el, su chica se volviera más fuerte.Otro caso es el mencionado antes con una chica del capítulo 160~. La cual tuvo prácticamente de todo excepto penetracion con el antagonista. Amaneció desnuda junto a él y el protagonista lo orquesta todo.También tuvo relaciones con la mamá de una de sus chicas pero dijo que prefería a su marido y que no quería al protagonista. Es prácticamente un cuck auto infligido sin razón lógica más allá de que es si fetiche. También tiene un giro de guión donde tiene que abandonar un mundo y regresará 50 años después ya cuando las chicas estén muertas, de entre ellas las que mencioné antes.
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Its a great concept for a story that is developed well. but big issue i have that makes it near impossible to keep going is the overused troupe of every conceiving him as weak. for me it just causes such frustration that I struggle to push through and continue.
The beginning was good/interesting but the further you read the more tedious it gets. Its not the worst I read but also nothing good. "Meh" would be the best assessment. I read to the current chaps (21) and the last 5 were hard for me to read since everything is just either dumb or contradictory. The main problem for me is that there is NO harem in the story. While I like slow burn novels, this one is a glacier.What makes it worse is the MC and his weird shift of personality when he starts to simp one of the girls in the story.
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