I just make a gamble and get a novel with the eyes closed to read.
I'm realy bad with multiple romance targets, but a gamble is a gamble
Last cap released over a year ago with only 14 caps to complete the novel. What's the problem with releasing the rest of the cap, or has the author given up on the novel?
Now I remember why I kept dropping it... it's the d*mn tone of the narration that keeps putting me off. Instead of an interesting first pov, it sounded more of like it's unfolding as a matter-of-fact. Like yes this is what happened, take it, read it, gobble that sh*t up. BUT THEN, it was redeemed by the super interesting dialogues lol. The convos are 10/10 entertaining! I should've just swallowed my petty critique *ss and powered through the ending. Mom take notes.
So...the end huh, man I can only stare at the wall in shock, it feels a bit suffocating for some reason, it ended too fast but I knew I was asking for too much for wanting it to be longer, but still... Nevertheless this was just, phenomenal, best read ever this year. I will carry this joy and gratefulness towards this WN my entire life
The translation gave me cancer, i spent half the time guessing the meaning of the sentences and the other half correcting them. I aint saying that its bad, I see the effort but it could have been better beacuse it has good content, translator dude or gal ya need an editor for this
I think it ends badly because it is literally the main character's Redemption, she has to suffer and that's Sadge (sorry im snooping around and I havent even read half of the story yet)
Read only few chapters so far, gotta say I'm intrigued by this, it seems like it's going to be a very thrilling story! the writing is beautiful and extra point for the good grammar only a little criticism is that introducing to many characters at the beginning could confuse other readers, but overall this is off to a good start.
the novel good but I'll just say the things I don't like, even tho the mc is the author of this book, I find it weird that he seemingly has knowledge of every forbidden evil ritual everytime and cause he's the author he can also rune speak?? I have never seen a novel explain such things in detail so I personally think it's annoying. then there's this trend where mc is too forgetful, little did he know that blah blah blah, like bruhhh, he's ruthless and doesn't confirm kills? he's an overthinking manipulator and he forgot something? I swear it's annoying, don't get me started on the beef he has with anyone and everyone
The idea for a fanfic is interesting, but the author knows neither the original novel nor the series. Example: it is the year 289.Denerys is about 7-8 years old and the author writes that in two years he will help her escape during the wedding with Drogo, while in the original,
during wedding she is 13 years old in book and 17in the series, Another example is Loras Tyrell who both in the book and and in the show is gay, here he is interested in MC's sister (his summoned general) who is a woman. The author literally writes that Loras Tyrell is not angry that MC refused to join him, which wouldn't allow him to get to know his beautiful sister, which is why he is a bit angry about it. But he is not desperate because his lands are full of beautiful women(
Read up to Chapter 20)
This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel.
1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is
"I know it's you who did this"
written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience.
2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great.
3. Update stability - Too good to be true.
4. Characteristics -
Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML.
Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.
The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.
its a pretty good story up until around chapter 100ish, though obbiously it has issues. primarily, its how casually the MC can grow in strength, but i enjoyed it cause i like overpowered MCs. however, around chapter 100 it seems to change to an entirely different story. The MC goes from being a body refiner (thus having a strong and muscular body) to being thin and lanky. he goes from being an extremely acomplished alchemist to being incapable of making a basic fasting pill. he goes from being able to make pill after pill easily to making a single pill exhausting him. read at your own peril, it was a waste of my coins