I’m back again to talk about ALARIC!I love the complexity of his character and I don’t know about others but I see the chemistry more between Lysandra and Alaric, and not Erythian and Lysandra!I’ll keep reading to find out but that’s just my opinion!
This is my first time dropping a review so early for a book but trust me, Lovelies! The Author earned that from me. She's just so good that I found anything she creates super interesting and excitingly amazing! I'm so ready for another ride of Miss B's Gorgeous Novel. Anyone coming across my review must add up, and add to your library! You'll definitely come to give me chocolates when you add up because..... Dude.....You don't wanna let this story pass you by! ?❤️TEAM DAMAL????
Author-san, your book is amazing considering the fact that you are new to writing. some grammars are not so well written but doesn't affect the book. I like your main character and his interaction with his women... above all, he will make a good husband.
Writing Quality is proper just comes down to preference really if one is to get into the brass tacks.Story Development, I ain't really got far just Chapter 82 but yeah as for the story development so far so good, the pacing is steady, not too fast not too slow, a few arcs that are an exciting read nothing too crazy just enjoyable.Can't really comment much on the Character development since I haven't gotten that far, but the MC is well developed, you know what kind of person he is and what he stands for, the others too, you get a general idea of what kind of people they are.Can't comment on update stability since well, I haven't caught up.Don't know much about the World Background as I haven't gotten to the point where it's been delved into, but as for what I've seen the Author has established or defined the world so you get the general idea of what kind of world it is.Overall, you really only going to be able to hate on the book if it really just isn't for you, since the book does satisfy the Niche it wants to satisfy.I can't complain because the only complaints I'd have would be the 'a you problem' type complaints. Nothing one should be complaining about, when getting themselves into books, for example someone reading a romance novel and hating on what the novel is. For instance I was excited when bro massacred the kids at the start, thought he was one cold mf. I was dissapointed when it turned out bro ain't diabolical he just a real stepper fr, an MC that stands on buisness, ain't righteous but ain't a demon neither.I give it 4 stars, 8/10 maybe 9, the story is good, and it's enjoyable if it's what you like.
I really love this . it's really interesting .
I am a slow reader, so please, update rarely
Good till now, but I still like Misty World and Apocalypse Chaos style, type or whatever you say type.but still, this new one is also Good.
no idea... just here for fp. tnx.........
it's like overlord turned up to 11 and if ainz ooal gown was a nymphomaniac girl.
Your world-building is rich and detailed, I feel like I'm right there with the characters.
I will be completely honest with my opinion -:1) system is useless(you will know if you read till chapter 20) . 2) story starts with a high node with basic information about world to understand MC circumstances along with dangers around him and just when you gets excited to see how MC will escape *boom* your MC is gone. 3) Suddenly we are reading about a boy then a girl about whom we don't know(I understand author that he wants to bring suspense but it just kills the attachment with MC) .4) the story got messy the movement another mc(in game) gets his memories.#this is a story which requires at least above 1000 chapters to fill plot hole, so I will come back after at least 300 chapters.
hello guys it's me the author of this novel Namleess_3, I really hope you enjoy this novel and don't get your expectations up because this is my first time writing a novel. and I didn't really put much planning into this novel, I just wrote it because i wanted someone experience before I write the novels i actually planned and developed.