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I have been looking for a story that has a more macho MC that isn’t obsessed with being beneath the radar. He has a viable plot reason for being driven to spread his fame. The guy can flirt and beat face without worrying too greatly about thinking.Story seems like it the MC will actually act like an MC, while the author is just there to progress the story without making fights complete nonesense to drive up illogical scenarious.Overall, I am greatly anticipating this novels progress.
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I hope and wish you update time will not killing me slowly T,TJust like You other novel , they story and novel is great but male me lile to dropped cause the release date , pay to read is okey but if one month just 15 chptr it was my lose
Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that too everyone Story Development: 4/5Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good. Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.Character Design: 4/5I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him. World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.
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Swordsman is one action-packed and spooky story (which Shonen Jump seems to have a lot of lately), with one of the main events of the series actually taking place on Halloween. And, while the scary season is over, the swordsman isn't, it's actually one of the most popular novels of the fall.DOMAIN EXPANSION.
This is a *** tale and the *** scenes are great. The rough way. And is also an adventure book. A competent one at that. With a somewhat developed world, where most elements can be viewed as a commentary at real life issues. All in all, it's a case of "came for smut - stayed for story".
