makenzie6902
1 question and 1 only (Does he become a full woman later on ? )
Nice..............................................
Loving the upload schedule ?? ?????????????????????????️u200d??????????
Reviewing this to get FP. Haven't read it
Amazing story, this is really engaging, I just read 50 chap non stop, can't wait for more.
Hi I'm Jessica and I find this book really interesting and I really like reading it. keep up the good work author
Un buen comienzo para esta historia. FP.
review for event. I like the interactions between the characters and look forward to finding out more about their power system. Some of the sentences are clunky or think the wrong word was used but still very easily readable. MC zombie queen -> Eva is adorable and life is worth living if you have fluff and food! I wonder with being able to experience living again if she will remain a bookworm? Early chapters have set up the world well and clearly shown the relationships of the main characters. Very glad to have tried this story and am eager to read more ?
The first couple of chapter seem interesting so far. so keep up the good work
I quite liked this story, it has great development and I think it has potential. It's quite slow paced and I don't think all chapters were good. Chapters are really short, but that's alright, I liked the story. It's a shame that there are locked chapters, would really love to keep reading, but it's not enough for me to start paying. Keep up the good work Author!
Since it has become customary for authors to provide the first review, I will do so as well. As I've stated elsewhere, this is my first stab at this type of format. My days are usually filled with the drudgery of copywriting for corporate clients, and it's slowly draining my soul, I have found writing this story to be a welcome relief from the monotony of my actual copywriting job. Although I hope I won't have to do this too often, as the story progresses I may have to come back to early chapters to retcon one or two minor things periodically. I will never nerf Mikhail, that's a promise I wish to keep. As much as I've planned ahead, there are some things that just happen, or seem more exciting or thrilling to have, and so I come back to the beginning to make sure it all makes sense.This is a story of revenge, but it will become something more in the future. This is a story of one man's journey of retribution and redemption, in the distant future it'll also become a story about what it means to wield power.I hope you like it.
no need for 2 mc.........you have ruined the novel
