Dear Enemy...

Hi, this is Serialeater, the author of this story. Now, even though my name may not inspire you to read this, do give it a try and I will try my hardest to make it worth your time. It is my first time writing, so please give me suggestions even if it's already good enough *wink*. And for the last time, it's not called soccer, it's called football. Now go on, read it. It's time for me to eat, ahem, I mean write.

i wish Qidian to focus on this Novel and update faster, this will boost more viewers because this story is very good and there is no flaw in the story where the writer make a lot of mistake with common sense and illogical story lines, i read only highly approved writers and this is a very good writer an the story is very refreshing, this novel got very high potential, please Qidian, update this novel faster.

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This will be fantastic, munya. On a serious note I am extremely excited for this novel, munya. I expect great thing DPA, great things, munya.

Nice, the word flow could be a little better but its not bad. I like the idea of the egoistical character being thrown down some steps or thats what I predict. Im assuming he’ll turn intl a dragon and have ti solve some trouble?

I was really surprised on how soo many different concepts and ideas were used in this story. There's aliens, time travel, revenge, super powers in this story and even with soo much on the plate it feels it's been executed well. Yes, there are moments were it feels too fast or too much, but with such complexity in the story I would have been surprised if there weren't any such moments. But I do feel things can get a little slow for good at some parts. But with that aside, I feel the world building is really done greatly! It is really well written and it keeps me intrigued to read more! Keep up the good work author!