I have read the first 25 chapters so my review is based on tHose chapters alone. So far the novel is extremely well written, the author does a really good job of providing details in a manner that doesn’t feel like it’s being rammed down your throat. Fight scenes are fairly well written and a good amount of back strong to both the character and the world is provided, though I do hope that the author provides more detail about the universe since it seems fairly interesting. Over all a really good start to a novel and I hope the author continues to release “the goods” for us peasants.
Really interesting story willing you to continuously read on.A few grammatical errors but nothing that harms the story. Can’t wait to read on, thank you for a lovely story :)
Those three words pierced my heart like a hot knife – Granny Lydia, Quinn's only caretaker and relative left, dead. A lump formed in my throat as I tried to process what he had just said. Is it even true? I looked at Quinn and the tears on his cheek. Of course it's all true. He wouldn't be affected by it really badly if it wasn't. "How– how did she die?" I asked awkwardly.
But he was a man, what i should i call him? Nurseman maybe?
when sergeant John climbed the Boxing ring and proposed a friendly match, Daniel wanted to go all out and see his true strength but when he checked sergeant John's cards to gauge his strength Daniel saw a new green cards among John's other regular soldier cards
maybe i dont have the perfection.but when i was a child im sort of kind and well dicipline,all because my mom specially cause of lord and iam really thankfull of it..when thing got miserable,they stop fighting,fighting for the life they want to give me instead they just step back and leave it all to me..
"We will be going to the underworld for the whole of Summer Break..." she announced.
As soon as the last person occupied the seat inside, the plane took off immediately.
"I'm giving you 15 minutes to get ready or else."
Terutama bukan Xinghe, dia masih fokus pada keinginan Lin Lin.
I said yep what a concept
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid