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Ill be honest like it, has Pretty decent story all around,building,character,world. the only thing that annoys me is when the atory says only 1/in a mil can awaken their grimoir but 2 chapters later in everone has a gOd dam grimoir...... but then again its like them chinese Novels where they go their the final stage Of cultivation and next thing we know Those stages are everywhere. so much For Rare like a Phoenix feathers.?
Not too bad.… at some points, got the yuri feeling ?
goooooooooood!!!!!!! this is a funny novel, i want more chapters for read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
This book is absolutely amazing! The characters feel so alive, and believable! The mc's friends also compliment his character really well, and watching their playful banter is really funny!
It’s a little too earlier to say very much. I don’t write Sci-Fi so it’s hard for me to understand the finer points but I think maybe a few more details can help. I did not expect humans to be wiped out like that, but that’s the direction the author is going, so it’s different then what I imagined. If you are a sci-fi reader you may want to give it a read. I’d like to see what the author plans to do now.
I'm dropping by to give you a 5-star rating. I actually thought about reading this story before I even knew that you write it. So I will be checking this out very soon. I'm in the middle of writing a new werewolf story on the side of my vampire God story. But I will check this out as soon as I am able to it sounds interesting. Good luck comrade.
Author my guy what a gem glad I found this loving it?????????????????Keep it up author /////////////////////////////////
the story is well written, the I like the use of vocabulary and it rolls well, my only issue with it thus far is in the prologue it said the president quoted the Bible about peace hope ect, I feel like having an actual quote that has those meanings would be well placed there. other than that, this is great
Full of chinese racism and propaganda.Remeber kids chinese = little dic* .a.a.a.aa.a.a.aaa.a..aa.a.a.a.a..a.a.a.a.a.s.s..s.s.d.s.s.fgr.fde
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Marvelous novel,world building,character development,romance,action and comedy everything is great,this novel is simply amazing.The novel has a new and reliable translator, so just read it.
to be honest I think this might be something created from the novel astral pet storeI like that novel and since the author is different might as well treat it as a completely different one....we never know maybe this one might become better than astral pet store novel
