I have read a few chapters.. the storyline progresses quickly.. the author's English is good enough to understand and even use describing words. However, many of those describing words are placed in awkward places of the sentences. I also wish there was more description on everything.. the setting, the characters.. etc. Good luck, author, please continue your hard word and improve your English.
I would have loved this a lot more if i didnt read the other one first as i had to many verying assumptions coming into this as this jumped from the original being pretty PG family loving to domestic violance,mental Illness and drugs but its still one of the best books on the website so i cant wait for more
So, how do I start? This novel is written quite nicely, even though there are a few improvements that can be done. Nevertheless, this writer has never ceased to put more and more effort in his novels. Can’t wait to see what happens next for this one.
I have returned ,honestly it has been 2 years, I forgot about this book because of sowmthing but now it shall continue ?u200d↕️?u200d↕️?u200d↕️
Loved the novel!! Amazing work done by our friend. Eagerly waiting for the new chapters. Characters are quite relatable. Wishing good luck to the author for the upcoming novels. May you become a successful writer in future.???
The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn't sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I'm sure when it's polished, it'll be an amazing novel. ?Keep up the good work, though
I really love the book coz its storyline is very different , interesting & intriguing . It keeps me hooked to it ❤❤❤Always eager for more updates
These chapters keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and maybe a sequel
Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2.Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.)Writing Quality:Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author. Story Development:This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted. Character Design:An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him. I am curious how he might change throughout the Story. Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him. Summary:Cute apex preditor snail is cute.
A great novel with a compelling story, characters and action that's described very well. Unfortunately, I'm not really a fan of reading game novels, partially cause I enjoy playing games more than reading. But despite that, I still managed to enjoy the reading, not only was the plot intriguing, the characters were well done and very much like some gamers I know.
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