King4ever
Morrrrrrrre! I neeeeeeeeeeeed morrrrrrrrrre!?????????????????????? Sooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooood!?????????????
The author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. The story title is quite hooking. Keep on writing and I think you will improve quite fast as your story has the potential and a really good plot. Great job author!!!
I haven't read it yet, only the synopsis.What caught my eye is the "lots of slapping part," who doesn't like a lot of slapping?The other point is the female lead is strong, OK good Tag. The best is she is a nanny and it's a harem.. Not reverse sadly but harem none the less! Authour ill save it and read it. I hope you continue with your work and I will add another review as I start reading. Good luck with your work!
