A truly amazing novel with a great main character that I personally like much. Moreover, the story is perfect with a great pace. Until now, I haven't found anything I would like to add to make it even better.
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I expected a more serious soldier novel.. but this reads somewhat like JP army novel. Girls in army, parents sending their sheltered flowers err.. kids as if on vacational camp instead to soldier academy. And the soldier sis tells these kids that she sent out their parents so that they don't see the harsher environment that they use to train them... i mean, why is it even a secret. And then they proceed to get instructed as to how to.. fold quilts hahaha this novel isn't for me
So far, so good! Your sense of humor is always fun to read, best of luck with the rest of the novel. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! (and don't listen to what Ctrlkris says!)
This book is an amalgamation of many popular books, for example the strange one is from another book called my backyard is the dumpyard of another dimension. the fishing pond is also one, the closet little people and the tree. But the most blatant of all is the shadow training
Everything was alright except i missed some wholesome romance in this novel unlike Battle Through The Heavens.
I like the story. It's really great. The way Kye's emotions are shown is well good and the way you show how your characters think is great too. They aren't just some people to decorate the scene but real people with emotions.Continue author-nim
Does he get cucked at all? At any point in time?
Might be readable for some but not for me.Here is an example of a situation of the novel. Our MC goes to sleep like a baby after jerk**g off watching his stats and he does that right beside 4 people that he doesn't trust in the least. One of them that he seriously beat and the others that he treat as cowardly ants.Why did he do that? Well the truth is that he didn't think about it even a little. As our dumb arrogant MC said earlier, he is invincible if he has a little strength. What can others do?
I dropped it cause the pacing felt like it was all over the place but maybe someone else may like it
Unfinished and left behind , plenty of errors even actions that a Veteran would do, did not really make since .. Concept is good.. But the devil is in the details