For one, this isn't actually a romance novel. Instead this novel is completely serious mystery-thriller/horror genre. Which is brilliant really. Doubly so when the system's main function is one of those revive systems (loading into previous save point.) However the characterisation of the protagonist is unreasonable. So unreasonable that it's just down-right annoying. The author has the protagonist become better (in mental capacity, critical thinking, and power) by 1% every time he dies. So even after 8 deaths the protagonist doesn't really change much. Sure the author describes that he has changed (using terms like mental plasticity), but in reality? He doesn't. Worse, the improvements are maybe evident for one chapter, with the protagonist himself bashing his own naivety, and then...? He regresses into an idiot again. He repeats the same mistakes. He plays the hero to the same consequences. This protagonist is a marvel of poor characterisation.
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Nah I didn't like it It's kind of strange the stupidity of the protagonist even though he proclaims himself to be smart and he said he was a gamer but he doesn't act like someone who has a brain not to mention that the writing is kind of confusing since you can't understand when it's a thought and when it's a speech and also the protagonist talks while fighting so you lose a sense of time just like when you're having movement in fights it's hard to understand what they're doing as you mention some things that happened in the fight after the action was done
Tbh I love how unique the story is, about the cosmoses, characters and so on. But the pacing is to fast. The introduction chapters were quite good but not the chapters after that,
Basically a rip off version of Bofuri or I don’t want to get hurt so I’ll max out my defense it’s like it but worse all the things that made Bofuri good this novel can said to arguably not have them your honestly better off just watching or reading Bofuri instead
This is not a masterpiece, but it's also not that bad of a read. While not always historically correct, the story is heavily influenced by Greek (with focus on Sparta) culture and mythology, primarily around Athena, Aphrodite, and Kratos (other gods are introduced towards the end).This story is about an earthling (MC) that transmigrates along with a war system. When initially prompted to select a civilization, the MC selected Greece which leads to the incorporation of Greek gods and soldiers. There are a lot of wars as the MC builds his kingdom against mostly non-humans. The MC is not overly powerful for most of the story, except at the very end.There is a harem and the MC does not shy away from taking advantage of it. There are a lot of open plots and loopholes that are never filled (the author admits it also). The ending is blah but probably better to end it the way it did instead of being butchered. The last arch was pretty much garbage. Otherwise, it wasn't a bad read and not terribly long.
There were some non-cliche parts, such as the female lead being so direct with her feelings, which is kinda fresh. However it still has alot of fillers.
13+ chapters in and I can really say for sure that this one's a lot better than the original one, that one is not bad, but this one is a lot better. I just paraphrased what Daniiii said.?For the writing quality, I'd give it a 5. Why? Because I want to. Ugh, because there are hardly any mistakes and grammatical errors. The words used to describe what is happening and what's in Evin's mind are able to express those scenes clearly. Story development, there are a lot of changes here that author made, and I love those changes. The pacing of the story isn't as slow as the original one, just as author promised. For the characters, I love the changes you made with each and every one of their own stories. I especially like the concept you thought of with Endra's spirit or whatever his name here is and Evin's. Now I'm wondering how different the other characters are. Lasty, this world background, author made a lot of changes, but I'm sure he will do a good job here. That's all for now... maybe will add a few things next time.