Very different beginning I can’t wait to see where it goes!
thankyou guys! im gonna read it
Its a bit grindy and progresses slow compared to some other weak to string novels, the mc is genuinely ruthlesss. The mc is not that op compared to other powerhouses and he struggles through his journey. I fo not know what is your preference so I can't recommend it for you but, personally, I like it.
I came back to see the comments under this novel cause i recalled 1 year ago when i wrote that this novel started off good but is turning more degenerate with each chapter and people were not happy.
Now i see that the author has destroyed his own work, tbh good for him for seeking short monetary gains and destroying his reputation in the process instead of focusing on the story which was decent early on.
Well no matter what this author is blacklisted in my book, won't read read his novels again when u know that the moment someone offers money he won't hesitate to destroy the novel.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development.
Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.
Judge hordan is pure evil character while fang yuan is evil
Because of the goals ( which I don't think is evil).
Fang yuan himself said that if kindness can help him achieve
Immortality he will become greatest and kindest saint.
On the other hand though judge hordans kill count is no
Where even close to fang yuan but he is just evil and that's it.
It's different from griffith, griffith is also not evil for fun but
Hordans is just villain. Kinda same analogy with joker.
chapter 909 and 910 are the same chapters just with different wording
and where could the LN be read?
This is one f*ck*d up story... it was still tolerable up untill the gender bender part... I had it enough I'm I'm dropping it... Don't read it if you can't tolarate cringe,gender bender,dumb MC,weard plot...also the r-18 parts of the story is skipped in the story so far i have read.
About 380 to 410 ish. They unlock after demon war
If you ever wonder what it feels like to be the OP old man or master in anime or novels this book is for you
Where did u get this info is it true