Demon Saga - Phoenix Dancer

This is A-W-E-S-O-M-EAwesome you know. this is A W E S O M E.Recommendation: Read at midnight (^.^)This is the second horror genre I have read, just hoping the mc doesn't become dark by killing someone in his Haunted House...

Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.

For one, this isn't actually a romance novel. Instead this novel is completely serious mystery-thriller/horror genre. Which is brilliant really. Doubly so when the system's main function is one of those revive systems (loading into previous save point.) However the characterisation of the protagonist is unreasonable. So unreasonable that it's just down-right annoying. The author has the protagonist become better (in mental capacity, critical thinking, and power) by 1% every time he dies. So even after 8 deaths the protagonist doesn't really change much. Sure the author describes that he has changed (using terms like mental plasticity), but in reality? He doesn't. Worse, the improvements are maybe evident for one chapter, with the protagonist himself bashing his own naivety, and then...? He regresses into an idiot again. He repeats the same mistakes. He plays the hero to the same consequences. This protagonist is a marvel of poor characterisation.

The story is totally awesome. I totally love it. It has a nice storyline and has a good character development. I like how the story focuses more about the mc's development. And i totally ship the mc to the male lead.? all in all he story is totally worth reading for.

Ori was sent flying 10 meters before being able to stabilize himself in mid-air. He looked at his hand which took the attack and shook his wrist a few times.

"One of his Avatars called Krishna! Do you know what he did!? He bound your fate to die like an abandoned animal in a worthless human war!"