I can feel that this has a future… i’m gonna wait til 100 chapters to enjoy reading this?......... lorem ipsum lorem ipsum lorem ipsum.
Great start that draws you in. Some explanations are a little confusing, though I still love it so far.
Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.
Pls, don't mind the grammar bad review since it finally got fixed just recently... so in short, you can finally read it flawlessly and with no grammatical mistakes (it might have but you know nobody is perfect)
Good story and very convincing character portrayal
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There is a trial Gaming novel the same as this months ago, it was about Pubg this novel has less controlling system, lets the host do whatever he wants in his daily life and doesn’t simp for a Girl. but this gaming novel about LoL i thought its going to be better but it is so disappointing First or second chapter it immediately wants to Vegtable the host when he wants to reject it, The system controlls his love life, and such. He got a very contRolling sYstem and He a simp thats i wanna say.
Love the story and mystery aspect of the novel. The characters seem well fleshed out and unique. The World building is probably my favourite part of the novel. With the many nations, continents and characters it really makes for an interesting story. The gaming quirks are also nice. The only downside would be the grammar but it's easy to understand and doesn't affect the story. I love this novel so make sure to keep updating it!!
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