In Cultivating World with Rinnegan

such a cliff hanger...face reveal pls

Different and refreshing compared to other reincarnation stories I've read .Grammar is decent and only needs slight tweaks , overall enjoyable .

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I was searching a story about zombies because I really like reading a zombie story and I am currently writing story about zombie.. I hope you can continue writing your story keep it up... wish you luck. <3

Well written plot and well developed storyline....MC as well as side characters are developing at good pace.... Could have stock a good amount of chapters first and released them frequently for the first month.... Should focus more on MC... Already many side characters, should introduce less....A little suggestion, want to make the chapter big, make the MC able to see others stats like hi