... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews... So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.
