Just Extra - Reviews

Top novel in quality of writing, major flaw of this novel is that webnovel is stupid and stop this piece of gem and decided to translate other garby piece of junk like 'peerless crappy system'.This is no cliché heavy idiotic hack'n slash meself gonna break the heaven kind, but this one is full of vitality and dynamic.What not to love?

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It’s good.                                                                                                                                 

... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it,  and a truckload if 5* reviews... So,  I've decided to give it a spin,  but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story,  why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality,  the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value,  as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.

I love this story so much and especially the MC Xiao Ming whom I believe to be hilarious and also exciting. I'm looking forward to the part of the MC's love life.

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I like this story it' s like a fairytale!!! i want to read it at once!

Love the story and mystery aspect of the novel. The characters seem well fleshed out and unique. The World building is probably my favourite part of the novel. With the many nations, continents and characters it really makes for an interesting story. The gaming quirks are also nice. The only downside would be the grammar but it's easy to understand and doesn't affect the story. I love this novel so make sure to keep updating it!!

This novel is an outstanding piece of literature, compelling from the very first sentence to the closing one. The author’s storytelling expertise shines in the richly developed characters and detailed plot. Every twist and turn kept me hooked, making it impossible to put the book down. The prose is both eloquent and easy to read, painting vivid pictures that immerse you in the story.

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"We are orphans and we are just moving to this city to live a normal life. Is it really necessary to point your sword at us. Can't you see that I have a younger sister here?" Max calmly answered them.

Cara didn't particularly care much about the history of the matter, but she did find it a little interesting. She wanted to understand the magic world better in hopes of reforming it and its ways, to show them many of the revelations she knew of from her first life.