Great start. Looking forward to how it develops
By far the most generic one dimensional cliche blend I’ve ever seen. Sort of like a mix between Superman and Wall-E. Absolute peak generic, unrealistic, and unoriginal pure justice seeking mc with absolutely 0 explanation as to why or how. So much so that it actually hurts to read. I pushed through because I actually love isekai, even if it’s bad, but I actually couldn’t press forward. Additionally, completely generic scientific raised organism escapes to Earth and protects it plot line. Absolutely 0 originality and absolutely 0 anticipation for the plot of the future. Mc is literally just a copy and paste of Superman in this twist. No actually acts like that and after reading many novels with mc’s like this, it’s actually boring and cringe to read.
This is not a review as much as author making a few things clear.First of all, this book will continue on. This is my first original book out there ever, and I have no intention of abandoning it. So unless something out of my hand happened, this book will continue to the very end. Second, unfortunately, I'm not a full time author. As this book doesn't generate revenue, I can not focus solely on it. As a result, it has a weekly update instead of daily. I ask for your understanding. Last but not least, yep, this isn't your typical Webnovel. I just had a story I wanted to tell and wrote it without consideration for what's trending or not. If you're an adventurous soul who would like to try new things, give it a chance. Perhaps you would like it!
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This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems.The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued.I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.
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As there's only 6 chapters out currently this will be negatively influencing the review FOR NOW.This is my opinion and personal preference only.The story starts out like many others, but not exactly like them, it's changed just enough for it to not be another boring cultivation novel generic start. My personal preference is that I don't get slapped with text walls of world background, or extensive family knowledge, that's quite unnecessary and can be pushed until later in the story. The author does this well as he gives just enough information to catch your attention but not overwhelm the reader. (Had to give 1* for lack of world background FOR NOW) Our main character wasn't an all powerful God-like being before his death, but a man who just wants to live eternally through his accumulation of alchemy knowledge. Which is great because he doesn't get everything he wants, and learns a lesson that not everything in life is attainable, even through hard work and dedication.The author does a great job at making a story well written even though English is not their native language. You may find grammatical errors here and there but they will in no way effect CURRENTLY getting the jist of the sorry.Overall I believe that this novel is a good read which has potential, it's not poorly written or pumped out with glaring errors just for something to be read. I can't wait to see more chapters and I have added this to my library.
Oh! My! God!!!!... This is great! I've only read chapter one, my hand were itching to give a review before going back. I love anything action packed and believe me this is overly packed with enough actions. Sierra that poor boy! what he went through broke my heart! Turned into an assassin at such a young age just to live? *sigh*. So I was reading and imagining the best actors that would act this story to perfection if it was made into a movie... Where are the producers and directors!?... I'm so excited for you author, congratulation on this great work of art. Finally I'm missing romance, why? My reading is not complete without a hot romantic... you know what I mean??. I'm shameless...?.For you author???
Wow! This is a great start, it made me want to keep scrolling to find out what’s next! Keep up the good work :)I like how both siblings care for one another, and loved each other ‘till the very end.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I'm loving this very much..there is so much in this story. The characters are perfectly designed and the world background is divine. The story line is captive too.......keep it up dear author.
The story had a very good start, there were some chapters which had me worried for the development of the stories, like in first town and casual day. I wont comment on grammar as i focus more on other aspects of story. the author already laid a groundwork for a good world so he should keep in mind of that. I would remind the author not to go in the direction of know it all and clever type MC without laying groundwork to make believe. If harem or romance then should have a good development like in some love at first sight. The villains and competitors should also not be some fools and should have some character. The author should not be discouraged by some comments but rather strive to improve his quality, I believe this story has a chance for good development.