The story's good, particularly the first chapter as some of us may relate to it. Mc is intriguing, and the writing quality is great. Good job Author!
Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.
Damn, the writing is really good. I love it when an author doesn't underestimate us reader's intelligence lmao. Definitely a lot of things to piece together which the author leaves for us to determine on our own while reading the story which I hope will have a satisfying explanation later. Don't break our hearts author. Lock in
I like how the story progresses and how we see that the character actually is trying to do something and find answers and I believe that this novel is quite good and everyone should try it
i won't comment on quality for now, but the synopsis, idea of the book, the merger of two extreme opposites in story is very interesting. keep it up mr.author.
Nice story and I will try to read it more.
hight quality spoted. it's hard to find original story on webnovel
this is the best thing I have ever read and I have read a lot of books!
iIlost my sit when read pow pow like a machine gun???????
The fighting scenes are so well explained it was surreal, I like how he explained the expression the way he stabed and his system is well defined including penalties. the world building is also good it was good read for me I hope author dwell more on character building and continue it..
nice and interesting one I'll be reviewing it
It was boring at first, but since i dont have any novels to read on, i tried to read this, unexpectedly it was good especially the betrayal