The first chapter and I am hooked. Are you kidding me? Why is she locking his heart away?! Oh God, the darkness is enticing.I love it. love the pace, love the story, love Dan. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
Wow this guy is a moron. Becomes a Baron from a nobody in 10 days. Goes outside. Simpathises with humans on the street who are blood packs and vows to make their situation better. Runs into two fleeing human women and kills pursuing lackeys of a Marquis for stangers. Leaves bodies on the street for proof. Now on the run and leaves more bodies and lets one escape just to harvest fangs which are worth some money. What a fking dumbass. All in 10 Chapters. Should I say as expected of a Chinese MC?
i liked, we need more chapters 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
I’m really disappointed, the author stressed so much how his protagonist would start from the bottom and would have to strive to improve in both and personality, but he is still the same the same OP MC. Even if he starts from the bottom he doesn’t struggle at all, he is the most talented of all that given time will easily surpass everyone else. The author says that he is weak-willed and indecisive, but he never acts like that, even if force by the circumstances still he never acts indecisive, he immediately works his ass of. The author says one thing, but the MC’s actions say another one. I’ve read only the first part before quitting because it was so disappointing, the author rants about something and then does the same thing. The MC never fails, easily obtain everything and his psychological development is poorly executed, he changes from weak-willed to iron-willed way to easily. And even if there is some whining in his thoughts, it is never reflected in his actions.
Bom vou tentar dizer algumas coisas que deixaria a história melhor na minha humilde opinião, eu gosto de mc fodoes, mas fassa os outros personagem fazerem algo também, não deixe o mc carregar a história sozinha, pricipalemente elena já que ela parece ser a principal interesse amoroso até agora, gostaria de ver um casal forte tanto o homem quanto a mulher, que ela não dependa tanto dele, fassa ele depender dela tambem em futuras lutas, assim a história fica muito melhor do que só o mc fazer tudo sozinho enquanto suas mulheres depende dele, ae elas não conseguem fazer nada, até agora a história tá muito boa, eu gosto muito de romance eu me parece que vai ter um bom, o autor tá sabendo trabalhar a quimicas do casal até agora.Bom trabalho autor continua o bom trabalho e sucesso na suas futuras obras.Ps: gostaria de um harem pequeno bem trabalhado 2 ou 3 garotas ( o mundo tá acabando tem poucos humanos, porque não mais mulheres para almentar a população quando encontrarem um lugar seguro para viver no futuro não, enquanto tiver amor não importa !
Awesome story with a solid characters and plot! You have an excellent grasp of language with your description that makes reading the story enjoyable to read. Keep Updating, you're doing a great job!
When I read harvard, I thought it's that famous school. When I found out it's a name, I was like, okay that's cool. I find your story funny to read, although I'm sure it's not a comedy. I'm entertained by your plot and story set up, especially the character. When it said "sort of float around" I crack up. Anyway, your story is a good material and I wish you luck in your writing journey. Keep up the good work author!
I like the amount of detail given in the book. The story also progresses in a smooth and interesting manner. It also has a lot of interesting characters that make it a compelling read. Keep up the good word. :D
si es posible me gustaria mas actualizaciones de esta historia, pero no se sisiguen actualizando a la historia pero me gustaria para que la continuaran