Dual Vintaskii

Well done to the author. Your writing style is different and lovely to read, however it has the potential to reach more readers and admirers. The author adopts an inconsistent approach to grammar and punctuation and would benefit from spacing out their moments of dialogue to provide an even powerful impact.

i liked, we need more chapters 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I haven’t gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.

The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he  feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.

"Jiejie is very happy! Jiejie did not expect that father would prepare this welcoming banquet for me! Meimei, tell me the truth! Was it you who convinced father to surprise Jiejie? Oh! Jiejie knows it was you!"

Kiel heard this and his heart sank. This was an important place and was the cradle for human's security throughout the galaxies. "Turn around and go back to HQ. Now." Everyone could feel their Captain's mood right now, as it was the same for them. They knew that the calmness shown by the Captain was a fearful thing.