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Seems to be funny, i will comment again once i finish the novel ✌?
Tbh i dont find any romance between Ah Lou and the Prince. I find it disgusting. Wasthere a concept if pedophilia in the ancient times? I mean we are talking about 22 yr old man and a 13 yr old. Though she is older bec of the rebirth, we are talking about a minor. I do not find their encounters romantic. I skipped through all of it as i find it weird and crazy. Dunno how this is romantic
Just finished the author's other novel Warlock of the magus world and hope this novel isn't rushed like it
How you found my joke after 3 months?
I really like it a lot.
i recommend reading it ??
gotta admit, the start is very captivating with high stakes.
if author knows what he is doing, this might turn into a very good story, which I hope happens.
Where do you read fanfics bc every website I know of has a very limited amount. Sou could you pls tell me where you read them? Thx
VERY NOT RECOMMENDED.
too much repeated 'clear statement' in every chance just for detailed plot to understand like every readers lack IQ, almost like explaining a lecture!.
while i read it completely (actually skipped) cuz for a chap that need to read and understand by one paragraph ended for 3-5 paragraph explanation. TORTUREEEE!
Actually it's still good but his cheat as he had 1m years worth library of peak world information is just a 'decoration'. while it's true he gave it to his friends, companion and trusted aides etc, but there are lack 'true support' like legendary cultivation manual for them to make em stronger so he didn't need to bear the world by himself! almost every sworn brothers / trusted aides he had just a kind of mental support and kind of beggar's lacked pills for cultivation.
the Harem? there is no such Harem even he had harem, while it's true there is a worth struggle mentioned as a loyal man, his 2 other women just a free gifts. Not a TRUE HAREM here.
nice story
I love reading this story.
Interesting
Wow so Dirty n Hot !!! I can’t put it down .. look forward to the 2 nd part ! Great writing !
