Here is my review after more than 170 chapters:My subjective opinion: I will cut this one short. The novel is excellent, and I will read it till the end. The author takes the effort with every update, and you can see that he cares about the readers. There is only one negative thing about the novel: the writing quality.Writing Quality: Annoying to read. Why? The author doesn't care about the numbers and sometimes uses the Indian metric system, which is a grave mistake. The math is so wrong sometimes. Oh boy. The chapters are also claimed to be edited, but I still see a lot of grammatical errors such as typos like theives instead of thieves and such.Update Stability: Excellent. 2, sometimes three chapters a day. The author delivers on the bonus chapter promises and is consistent.Story Development: It is not unique; however, the author cares about the story. The characters have personalities and backgrounds. The story is easy to follow, and you won't find many plot holes. The story concentrates mainly on the game, but the real-life part is just as enjoyable. In short: The story will keep you interested.Characters Design: Maybe the best part of this novel. Well thought out deep characters with easy-to-remember background stories. World Background: Getting more complex as the chapters go. The gaming world of omega is very deep and still mostly unexplored. There is a lot of foreshadowing about the other races, strong NPC's, and the past.The real-life is mainly focused around the characters and not built up. Countries such as country P country J country X and six trillionaires rule this world. We get to know more about MC and his family. You can also smell romance in the air. Afterword: The story starts just like every other VRMMO story, but the author got hooked and built his own world. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter, and this is the first-ever novel where I dumped all my coins.
This book is finally a breath of fresh air. I was getting sick of all these books where the the MC has a 10,000 times reward system or a sign in system where they hide from all the action. I’ m begging everyone do not let this book disappear.
Extremely bad book.Read 19 chapters and its a sure drop book do not choose it.I wasted time on it, and i rarely say so.Maybe it's better after 30-40 or whatever chapter but you really can eat cactus, if you able to read until then.
cooll....................................................................... I liked it.. can't wait to read more on this... but it's a female lead rite? it's placed in male lead... wonder y?
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good work!??? keep it up, author! You had done amazing work. I hope you will get success in this. Your web novel story is incredible. . .?
this novel was funny not because it is comedy, because the author has a thing for past, and always unconscious mc, i don't know how many times the mc reminiscent his past and I lost the count the mc lost consciousness. Now I shall name the author "the unconscious author" or "the past author" hahaha.
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synopsis is completely incorrect and all the female leads are literally forced to live the MC by systems. also all reviews before 3-4 days ago are probably paid as all 5 stars 2 months ago.
I was really enjoying the story until I got to chapter 40 if you read it you will understand .
Probably not going to read since there’s no harem, but I do appreciate you telling the readers that it’s not harem unlike other authors who say “Read to find out ?”
The grammar is really bad consisting almost entirely of run on sentences....................................................................