When The Love Comes

The writing quality is ok but not especially great.The updates are sometimes stable sometimes not...The storry development is not especially bad, but does not make much sense eather.Characterdesign is the big problem of the storry. Characters seem to make their choices only to bring forward the plot and do not have their own motives.The Ideas for the world is an slightly original esper setting. Sadly the premis ruins the rest of the setting.

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translation becomes bad with each character

I  really like your book, especially the word twists? you’re doing good author keep it up, I barely found faults but you can still do better?❤️

good work!??? keep it up, author! You had done amazing work. I hope you will get success in this. Your web novel story is incredible. . .?

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